Wednesday, October 8, 2008

MY ANGEL :) (as insisted!!)




hmm.. so lemme tell u a li'l abt the situation this poem was written in...well, it was written last night (better reffered to as today morning..)..4 o'clock..almost..when a loved one wished for a poem..written in absolutely fucking..n crap mind-state..finished in almost less than 12 min...



"aree..plz betu suna de na..bahut mann kar raha hai.."he said..

so this onez for you 'swetz'...;)



MY ANGEL



when sad you feel..
or kicked by a bad flu..
when u search for a smile...
but sadness sticks like a glue..
don't be worried..
all problems he 'll mend..
and if he won't do it himself..
an angel he will send..!!
may not ride down a rainbow..
may not hav a divine glow..
may not give ur life a hard blow..
but maybe shez the one writing this..
maybe shez sumone you already know..!!

may not be a princess jumped out of a fairy tale..
may not be as bright as a precious jewel for sale..
may not wash your worries in a quick flow..
maybe shez the one writing this..
maybe shez sumone you already know..!!
can i be your angel n fill color in ur life..
soft to cuddle and guard u tight..
everytime wen u share..everytime il care..
and wen all leave ur side..i promise il stick there..
don't know wat i can do for you..
cant bring the water up wid a tide..
cant swim a river..
cant walk the desert so wide..

cant explain what u mean to me..
cant tell you how much i love you..
cant tell u the things i'd do..
but da..

can i still be the angel for you...??





love:nickku..d gr8!!


22 comments:

Tara said...

Aww..sweet! Yeah girl you can be my angel, can I be yours? Good to have someone there who still loves you and takes care...:)

nikkita said...

@tara ji...

sure ma'am...ur most wecum netime..
lv:nickku

gaurangi said...

ohhhhhhhh nickku shooo shweeet...
n after reading this i believe, yes u r the angel for many lives....
n most welcum frm my side...
luv

Priya Joyce said...

wow kitna sweet post hai re ye simply liked it re

Sakshi said...

I KNOW THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR PHRR

right?
;)
Beautifoool
And i know now that i have a loooong way to go before i rest with a nice enough self composed poem.
Peh. Depressing thought.

I love you beep!(and pray why am i saying it now? Am not drunk. No am not.)
S.

Sakshi said...

@gaurangi
Heall yes she is an angel She'll give you the best budday gift ever and even give you a gift for no reason at all. And then she'll act like this super bitch and a pain in the ass for no fucking rhyme or reason.
Yeah, my angel she is.


Beep am confounded. Am lost. Help me phrr ki angel? Tujhe kya gift doon? :(
Kuch famajh ni aa ra.

nikkita said...

@gaurangi..
thanku so very much..um glad u liked the poem..
lv:nickku

nikkita said...

@PJ...
thanx re... ;)

nikkita said...

@ beep!!
wow...u knoe tat this was written for da...n ur absolutely right..it was the same fucking nite..wen u were takn to him n not to me...

nikkita said...

@beep...

two comments..wo bhi sugary sweet from meri apni beep..hell..waz wrong?? bata kaha chupa rakha hai meri purani beep ko...

n gift??mere lie?? kyu be?? tabiyat kharab hai kya??

abhishek said...

she do ride down a rainbow...
she do have a divine glow...
she maybe the one reading this...
she is the one i already know...
she definetly is a princess...
a little fat although :)
From cloud no. nine to this sweet little poem divine,
I m proud to say, that this cool angel, is the best sis of mine....
Cool work dear, cool work...
Yo :)

nikkita said...

@chekoo da

wow...loved it...love u..
muahz!!

Rajesh said...

Angelic...emotional...sweet....and what not? Loved reading thou m late here....been busy last week..

may not be a princess jumped out of a fairy tale..
may not be as bright as a precious jewel for sale..

loved this line...was very well written...hats off!!!


Expecting more in the days to come

The Maverick said...

baaraa minutt?!?! baraa minutt main itna deep at around 4 in the maarning!?!.....tum loag hum jaison ko complex daitay ho yaar....Phrrrrg must b just over-the-top-happy.....wonder who'll write for me....
(L.I.T.)
P.S. Phrrrrg hasn't bothered to write a C....
I'm not proud of the Partner if he hasn't even msged you....

nikkita said...

@rajesh..
well well well...its totally fine..betr late than neva...expctatn and hope i kinda dnt like these words...HAV FAITH buddy!!!therz lot more..
well congratz for shreyaz comment..u must be..flying!!!

nikkita said...

@sam...
true...is this????
maverick...i mmean THE MAVERICK>..commented here???himself???
n han da replied...usi time..n han yaar,...hav faith..sabko milega...thoda thoda sabke liye hai..n kahi na mile to buddey...mai hu na...da hai na...humse kam chala lena..hehe...

nisargmeister said...

I'm late and um not sorry... as always....but you always rob me of my words...thats you....so i better keep giving these dumb looks and let the saying and writing work..or for that mateer nething to do with words rest with you...cuz ur the great nikku...and damn good at it too..

nikkita said...

@nisarg..da..
jab kuch nhi likhna tha to comment kyu likha??
waise i knoe wat u felt about the poem..u told me then n there..that u loved it...and gave me the most beautiful award..by not DOZING OFF...hehe...
Lv:nickku..d gr8

Comfortably Numb said...

NIce...but trust me that using proper English gives it a nice look/feel. I mean I prefer reading proper English in a post. It doesn't necessarily mean that you have to use it while doing everything. But then if its a blog post..:P

Cheers!!

nikkita said...

@comfortably numb..

point taken sir..will try my best..
keep coming..

\,,/ cheerz!!

Marym said...

hi nikitha!!i was just stoppin by your blog and i am really impressed by your works.and i loved this piece very much!!by the way i'm maryam....nice readin your blog!!
take care!!

Marym said...

hi nikitha!!i was just stoppin by your blog and i am really impressed by your works.and i loved this piece very much!!by the way i'm maryam....nice readin your blog!!
take care!!